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The surgery is done. They took out all of my hardware. I'll be at school by Thursday. ^^
Recently I've been playing a game called Revenant Dogma. A really fun rpg game. I like the main characters in it, so I might make a phew posts today. ;)
So, do you think my TF story should be of a Pokemon? If so, should it be with Eevee, Vulpix, Snivy, or Buneary? Or should I do all four?
In other news, I'm steadily and slowly working. I'm picking up a lot of ideas for my vore stories and other stories. I hope I can work on TF stories as well. Please give me some ideas. Anything.
I've still have yet to get to my brave frontier. I'll let you guys know if I do.
In an alternate world, Saaheim is called a Shadow Dragon, but his species is not the type you think they are due to there name. They are pretty endangered, with only 11 left in existence. Saaheim is the youngest and is only 3 feet tall. He meets a boy and his brother, which his, tries to kill him, but Justin won't let him. Justin is :iconchristiane326:


Justin was reading one of his books in the local library at the town of Rufus. It's named after the famous swordsman Rufus who was said to slay many dragons with just an iron sword. As Justin leaves the library you can see how he looks. He has carmel hair, green leather shirt and blue leather pants, brown boots, with a sheath as his belt, carrying a training sword in it. His older brother Christian, came over excited.
"Hey bro! Guess what? You're coming with me!", said Christian. "What? Why?", asked Justin.  "A dragon has been sighted in the forest near the village, an I'm supposed to kill it. I thought you'd come with me, since you want to become a mercenary." "Sure, I'll go. Finally I'll at least get to learn the basics of it." Christian got ready, loading up plasma rifle and two pistols Justin case. (:XD:) Justin took a few knives if he loses his sword.


The two ventured off into Giant Forest. They call it that because of how easy you can get lost. It's a big maze. Christian however, knew it like the back of his hand as they looked nearly everywhere for it. Then, right there, right in front of the Elder Tree, they saw it. The Elder Tree is the tallest and  widest tree in Giant Forest, being 10,000 feet tall. They see something unexpected about this dragon. It was.... small. It looked to be only three feet tall. It was black furred with a navy blue under belly, two small white horns on top of his head, a cute black snout, a small little black furry tail, and when it opened his eyes, his eyes resembled the eyes of a human, the color of them also navy blue. It's little wings were all black as it stretched, waking up. As it did, it took a curious look at the two teens, tilting it's head in curiosity.

"Well that's unexpected.", said Justin. "True, but still, a dragon is a dragon, so I can't let it live.", said Christian, pointing his pistol at it. Justin gasped in shock. Was his brother really going to kill it!? It was just a small hatchling! Before Christian has a chance to shoot, Justin walks in front him and blocks the way. "No, Christian." ,said Justin, in a serious tone. "What the hell did you say? Are you mad!?" said Christian. "It's a dragon. When it grows up, it's likely to kill people, and become a threat! I'm going to kill it before it does happen!" "No!"
"Get out of the way!" "I said NO!" Justin suddenly punches Christian!

To be continued........
Things have happened, a lot of things. You see I'll do it in order.

1. Got through physical therapy

2. I'm a new uncle

3. I've got a niece

4. Is able to walk  now

5. Was able to attend school

But now I can't. Today I'm going to have another surgery to tiake out the hardware out of my ankle. Please wish me luck. I miss you all.
Episode 2: How a friendship begins

Saaheim wakes in bed, seeing a young boy looking at him. He had bandages all over his body, he tried to move, but the child stopped him.

???: You need to rest, please don't move yet.

Saaheim: Wait, who are you. I don't even know who you are or where I'm at.

Justin: It's Justin. I'm guessing you're from the village of Reapers, right?

Saaheim: Yes.

Justin: What happened?

Saaheim: Well, wh- I- *tears up*

Justin's heart dropped as he saw him cry. It was too much to ask already. He's been through enough.

Justin: I'm sorry I asked. It must of been to much.

???: All you can do is let him rest, and when he's ready he'll tell.

A man comes in through the door. He has a heartfelt smile and personality just be looking at his face. He wears yellow leather armor and prized sword on his belt.

Justin: Oh hey Dad.

Ryu: My name is Ryu, sorry Justin asked. He just gets a little too curious.

Saaheim: It's okay. I understand why. It just happened so fast.

Ryu: Why not talk about it?

So Saaheim did. He told them everything, from he got back to his village to when he ran away. It almost made Justin cry himself.

Justin: That's awful.

Ryu: I'm sorry for your loss.

Saaheim: It's not your fault, you don't have to apologize.

Ryu: I have an idea. Why don't you live here with us?

Saaheim: Really!?

Justin: Really!?

Ryu: Really.

Saaheim: Thank you! I wish I could hug you right now.

Justin: Just what until you heal for that. *smiles*

And that is how they're friendship started, and marked to first step to realizing they're destiny two years later.

Justin and Ryu belongs to :iconchristiane326: ^^
Opposing Team And Boss Battle info

Tariq

Age: 12
Class: Warrior
Magic: Fire
Level: 20 (for now)
Weapon: Twin Fire (twin blades)
Armor: Dragon Scale (armor)
Attack: 110
Defense: 120
HP: 500
Speed: 75
Luck: 12
Bio: Saaheim's little brother, thought to be dead. When Saaheim didn't come to look for him, Jared found him and  they both willingly joined the Chaos Dragon's side. He wants to change everything back to normal using the crystals, to bring his village back to life, and then, put them back, but it won't be that easy.

Christian

Age: ???
Class: Plasma Gunner
Magic: Light
Level: 28 (For now)
Weapon: Shine (Plasma Rifle)
Armor: Gunner Armor
Attack: 175
Defense: 136
HP: 1200
Speed: 203
Luck: 15
Bio: Justin's brother, who disappeared, two years after Saaheim was found. He wants to let out the power thatbwas sealed away inside the crystals, once that, no one can stop him or his teammates for taking the world for their. He plans on betraying and defeating the Chaos Dragon so he can take control himself.

Genny

Age: 13
Class: Ninja
Magic: Dark
Level: 32 (for now)
Weapon: Crimson (Ninja blade)
Armor: Expert Ninja Armor
Attack: 180
Defense: 124
HP: 1500
Speed: 300
Luck: 10
Bio: Alex's little sister, and was also a former slave. She was supposedly killed by an arrow to the chest, and Alex had no choice but to leave her behind. The Chaos Dragon brung her back, but after hearing Christian's plan, she joins him for power, and revenge. She'd like to kill Alex for leaving her behind, but it wasn't his fault, but how can she now?

Axle

Age: 17
Class: Dragon Knight
Magic: Demonic
Level: 38 (For Now)
Weapon: Dragon Horn (spear)
Armor: Dragoon King Armor
Attack: 200
Defense: 180
HP: 2200
Speed: 99 (he's not that fast)
Luck: 8
Bio: He was a loyal soldier of the imperial army. The kingdom was a place that people could give hope to, but was destroyed by the Chaos Dragon's forces. Now he looking to bring it back, just like Tariq, but now they both are convinced to take the power fot themselves.

Jacky

Age: 14
Class: Aqua Mage
Magic: Water and Ice
Level: 46
Weapon: Tsunami (staff)
Armor: Magi Robe
Attack: 230
Defense: 200
HP: 2700
Speed: 102
Luck: 6
Bio: The older brother of Marina. He decides to awaken the power of the crystals. He believes the power should no longer be sealed and let out, but he's making a big mistake. He works alone.

Chaos Dragon
Leader of the dark forces and wants to make the world for evil dragons and monsters only by destroying the world and it's occupants. We have no idea what his stats are at the moment. But we also know, he was crossed by the wrong human, and due to it he thinks all are he same promises to make a new world. With the help of five individuals, he wants his dream to become reality.

Christian and Genny belong to :iconchristiane326: :iconpoppy4526:
Episode 1: Losing Everything

Saaheim wakes up at his home eager to get ready for his training. He puts on his clothes, grabs his Scythe, and heads to his sensei Jared. Jared is found by the river in his village, wearing expert Reaper clothes.

Jared: Okay Saaheim, you ready for training?

Saaheim: Yeah!

You see, this is a very special world. This world of Silver is run by the four crystals of power in the four continents of the world. Without these crystals, the world will be in disarray. Saaheim is one of first kids chosen to save his world, because part if the reason his village suddenly was destroyed because someone tampered with one of the crystals far away. And it was planned to take over this world figured this village would be a threat.  The village is called the Village of Scales. It is because the people work with dragons. They also accepted reapers. The people here mainly use their powers for good and the protection of people, not to fight. They fight only when forced to. Since I've been talking so much, we speeded up the 10 hour training session. You see, Saaheim wants to be a heroic Reaper and his final test is tomorrow.

Jared: Good work. You've really been improving. Tomorrow will be your final test, so rest up for tomorrow.

Saaheim: Okay, Master Jared! See you tomorrow! *runs home*

Jared: Heh. Such a good kid.

The following morning, Saaheim goes out into the forest to take one of his walks. The moment he comes back, his village is in flames. He runs in to see everyone, dead. His mother, his father, his friends. He sees Jared up ahead, fighting a mysterious and powerful figure. Jared sees Saaheim and signals him to run.

Saaheim: *begins running* I can't believe this is happening!

He is chased by a few evil monsters, who successfully scratch him up a bit before letting him go. The weakened and now orphaned kid ran wearily through the woods and to the nearby village of Tole. This village is a neighboring town down south. He collapses in front of the entrance, tired and weak from the trauma.

Saaheim: (crying) W-why?

Meanwhile, a man and his son are heading to the lake to fish. His name was Ryu and his son was Justin, a nine year old boy. They see a boy right in front of the village and go to see him, shocked and checked to see if he was alive. This is the beginning of a story that is going to unfold....

Justin and Ryu belong to :iconchristiane326:

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masterlevan1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2016  Student Writer
Thanks so much Riolu (awesome pokemon x3). I'm sorry for getting back to your watch late, but thank you so, so much for giving me a watch :hug:!
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riolulover56 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
No problem! I really like your work! Besides, dragons are awesome in my opinion. ^^
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masterlevan1 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student Writer
Well thanks mate! *snuggles* And of course they are! What's not awesome about them =D
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riolulover56 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
I just wrote a story involving one in my journal. Can you see if the story looks nice so far? :aww:
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Lucariolover45 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Uh hey friend!!
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Lucariolover45 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey tell me if this is a crazy weapon.
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Lucariolover45 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi friend.
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travis-lawson Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Heya you still playing brave frontier
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riolulover56 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016
Sorry, I've been really inactive. I'll let you know when I'm on again.
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Charizardandriolu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Hi!
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